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Subject:Rec - Genfic
Time:10:55 pm
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Title: The Ascent
Author: Annakovsky
Characters/Pairings: Barney, Simon, Jane, Will, Bran
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: "I'd like to commission a sculpture," Mr. Mitothin says, standing in Barney's studio.
Notes: Lovely fic, "fixing" the ending. Yesss.

There's a long pause between his ringing the bell and Jane coming to the door, her hair going in all directions. She's got a robe pulled on over pajamas, her arms wrapped around herself. "Barney?" she says, sleepily squinting in the hallway's light.

"I had a nightmare," Barney says. He feels like he's about seven years old, and he gives her a look that he hopes reminds her of him at that age. "Can I sleep over here?"


The Ascent
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sky_wanderer
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Time:2008-04-29 06:15 am (UTC)
Wow. I really really love the way you set this up. It gave me the shivers, how Mitothin just 'shows up' and then Will comes, sees the statues, and you can just see how things are being set into motion again. It leaves so much open for more- I hope? :P - and I love the mystery of everything. I teared up though about the death of Simon's son. So very sad. :( Very beautifully done! I loved it!
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shanaqui
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Time:2008-04-29 09:59 am (UTC)
This one isn't actually mine! It's a rec. You can leave a comment for the actual writer here.
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sky_wanderer
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Time:2008-04-29 04:01 pm (UTC)
*blushes* Oops, I should have noticed that! Ack! Well, thank you for sharing it, and for pointing me in the proper direction to leave comments!
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